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Dragonborn (Skyrim DLC)

Where to begin? Dragonborn is aesthetically great. That’s a good place to start, I think. The music is a three-way mix between the Skyrim soundtrack, a few new tracks and, best of all, some of the old Morrowind songs. Visually, Solstheim is distinct from Skyrim as I knew it would be. The south of the island ow looks more like Vvardenfell than the Solstheim I remember from Bloodmoon ever since the red Year, but more on that later. The north is mostly glacial ice, with a small band of snowy pine forests in between. The things that reappear from Morrowind like bonemold armor, Redoran bugshell houses and Telvanni Mushroom Towers look like graphically enhanced versions of the same visual style of it’s predecessor. Apocrypha, the realm of Oblivion the player will get to visit, is an infinite library that is visually distinct from all other locations in the series so far and is, in terms of gameplay, a lot more of what Oblivion should have done with it’s Daedric realms.

The lore books are good, adding some new info on Solstheim and finally explaining “Red Year” in detail. Also, we learn what the Dunmer people think of the Tribunal 200 years after the events of Morrowind. Really, the whole DLC, being both the first time a location appears twice since Arena and the second time a character has recurred in the series is a load of fanservice for Elder Scrolls lovers.

There are two main plots, the Dragonborn story which has a lot of awesome buildup and a lackluster-but-not-terrible ending and a villain whose character arc can be given the same description and the Telvanni plotline, where you work with the wizard Neloth. The latter is my favorite quest line in all of Skyrim and it’s DLCs. Both are interesting, but while the Telvanni arc is better written the Dragonborn story has a lot more gameplay rewards like several new Shouts and weapons. 

All in all, the best Skyrim DLC yet and I hope they top it with the next one, whatever that may be.

I did it!

I have a book out!

King of the Water Roads is for sale on Libboo for $1.99 a pop. But here’s the trick, Libboo offers prizes for registered buzzers who plug books a lot. Since I am a registered user, that means I am eligible for prizes on my own book. 

So, who wants to compete with me? Who wants to beat me at my own game and sell more copies of that book than the writer himself? If you do, just try me. Even if you don’t, it’s a super cheap fantasy novel and it’s pretty short, to boot, so you can get a nice little chunk of story to fill a weekend. Make sure to tell all your friends!

November Decisions

In November, Americans and truly all citizens of the civilized world will have to make a vital, life-changing decision. 

They will have to decide whether to buy my book on Nook or Kindle. BOOSH!

King of the Water Roads: The Violet Scar is coming November 1st via Libboo, the first novel by me, Joseph Mazzola. 

In the kingdom of Markasia, guardsman Garth Gerisson is branded a traitor. He escapes among the very fugitives he once herded towards execution and must find a life worth living in a land with no resources and no law outside the word of a near-absentee king and the cold law of steel.

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The Elder Scrolls V: Dawnguard Review

Hi guys! Despite the evidence of your senses, my blog is not strictly Elder Scrolls themed, but I thought I would do something nice for my PS3 and PC brethren by giving a spoiler-free review of the new DLC expansion for The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim, which if you have been away from the internet since a month before E3 is called Dawnguard.

Let’s start with the integration into the existing game. I think that, with the exception of a few blips where vampire attacks on towns (a new feature I actually like) will happen before you hit the level to start the quests, the integration is smooth. There are new enemy types within old enemy types who will appear in pre-existing dungeons. My primary example is female Falmer and “Falmer Warmongers” who wear a new heavy armor variant. I am told that pre-existing vampire caves are also re, aha, “vamped” to include gargoyles and death hounds, two new enemy types that I enjoy fighting, but I have not yet seen this firsthand. Two new dragon types, revered and legendary, now appear at high levels. They use a new Shout, which you too can learn, that drains vitality. Both types look very visually interesting and are fun to fight.

So lets talk, now that the integration is done, about plot and setting. As the ad campaign stated, there are two factions, the Volkihar vampires clan that was formerly just a name in a book and the Dawnguard, an order of vampire hunters. The expansion invariably starts you off with the Dawnguard themselves. They are led by Isran, a Redguard so extreme in his methods of vampire hunting that even the resident extremists from the vanilla game, the Vigilant of Stendarr, think he’s what we would call “a bit weird for vampire hunting.” The first quest sets up the initial choice. After finding a mysterious vampire woman named Serana in a cave, you bring her back to Castle Volkihar where her father Harkon offers you the full power of a Vampire Lord. This “blessing” will wash your blood clean of lycanthropy, should you have it, and start you along the path of a night walker.

I, being the goody two-shoes that I am, chose the Dawnguard side, using a werewolf character. I do not know how different the two sides are, so I will not speak to that. However, the adventure truly begins, and I shut up because of spoilers, when Serana seeks you out at Fort Dawnguard itself to ask your aid.

The new locations are great. Fort Dawnguard looks like a huge, imposing and well-equipped stronghold when it is restored and Castle Volkihar is a dark and threatening place in the mists of the far north. You can almost feel the oppressive stuffy heat and stench of blood when you walk into the latter. 

Of the two “large” new worldspaces only one was given much attention in the ad campaign so it will be the only one I’ll name: the Soul Cairn, returning at last for the first time since Battlespire, is a dim and creepy place. The unsettling and spooky aesthetic is spot-on for the place where the Ideal Masters, mysterious and powerful beings, lord themselves over those who were foolish enough to try to trick them. As for the other new locale, I will say only that it is beautiful and sad, and that the new music drives the sadness yet farther. 

Now last but not least, character. Whatever you wind up thinking of Serana, she is an actual character with likes, dislikes, insecurities and flaws. This is important, because most of vanilla Skyrim’s followers were no more fleshed than every other NPC. That was enough for random aquaintances and passers-by, and some of the non-follower characters like Ulfric and Paarthurnax actually did have a lot of really good moments that happened off-screen, but if Bethesda is going to have character moments for NPCs and have follower characters those two groups would do best to overlap heavily. Just as long as the option to explore alone stays. Personally, I really like this development because it shows that Bethesda can tell a personal story, and have the follower’s story strongly effect that of your own main character, while still telling a great world-scale story that is heavily reliant on pre-existing series lore.

So I say if you have an xbox, get it immediately. If you don’t, I highly suggest that when it comes out on PS3 and PCs you get it. It is very close to Bloodmoon for Morrowind on my scale of “how much I like this Elder Scrolls expansion.”

Glad to be White Collar (Starts with a Rant)

Again, the cursors stubborn refusal to stay in the text box inconveniences me. Someday it won’t magically click into a-

Okay, it just did it again. Seriously, that’s twice since I’ve loaded the page! Hellfire and damnation, there is no reason for this machine, while the mouse pointer is over this text box, to clock me into the title bar after I’ve already filled it out and am midway through a sentence! 

Anyway. Regaining my composure. Contrary to the juvenile stereotypes, I find that becoming a white-collar office worker has, rather than immediately turned my life into a gray, samey mass of bored melancholy and insta-killing my every creative urge, the relative lessening of immediate financial worry has allowed me to branch out and work even more enthusiastically on my writing. The lack of worry over a day job has caused the largest distraction from my creative work to melt like a spring snow. I’ve already set to on worldbuilding and have started yet another book draft that is already exceeding its predecessor in terms of originality and aesthetic distinction.

So last week was good, and this week is shaping up great. The sun was out today and I’m reading up on Egyptian armor and folk monsters.

EDIT: The strangest, best part, however, is what I’ve called “that awkward moment when you get excited seeing a help wanted sign in a convenience store and realizing you don’t need it.” I still compulsively check storefronts for signs, and smile when I see them. 

Not A Review: Why Song of Ice and Fire Works

This isn’t a review. I did a review of Song of Ice and Fire by George R. R. Martin and season one of Game of Thrones on HBO on my livejournal back when I did that. I’ve even tackled the descriptive style of the books series here on tumblr, and this is related to that but is not it. 

This thread is about why the books work so well. Okay, not entirely because there’s a lot of reasons. This is a post about why the characters work so well. There will probably be spoilers, if not for the books then certainly for the HBO series. 

Now I am going to go right ahead and assume that none of my readers at time of writing are princesses sold into sexual slavery by an abusive brother in exchange for an army. I’m pretty sure none of you are crippled boys who can possess animals and possibly humans. None of you are sorceresses whose god gives you incredible power in exchange for blood sacrifices. None of you are queens trying to defy prophecy after years of unhappy, abusive marriage. None of you are knights sworn to protect a king who you yourself murdered to save a city and were hated for it. 

Danaerys Targaryen, Bran Stark (called the Broken), Melisandre the Red Witch, Cersei Lannister and Jamie Lannister. Oh hey, look at that. And yet, when each of them get perspective chapters (I won’t go into Melisandre’s, as hers is in the most recent book) we are thrown into their skin, into the darkness behind their eyes and we can see why they tick. Even though you are none of the “grand scale” things they are, we get to see them undergoing their very human processes and doing very human things. So even characters that you may feel would be ‘too mythic” to care about like Dany or too villainous like Jamie or Cersei are actually very easy to follow and understand. Even if, in Cersei’s case, you don’t sympathize you can at least see where they are coming from.

I think anyone (myself included) who wants to learn how to draw people into characters should take a lesson from Mr. Martin because he is just that damn good. When I read books one and two, I did not expect to, in a twisted and roundabout way, start to kind of like Jamie in book three on. So really, getting us so deep inside a character’s skin that we know their deepest thoughts and innermost fears is really a good avenue to chase.

Elder Scrolls Online

I changed my mind, I’ll write about this.

So today The Elder Scrolls Online was announced. Personally, I expect it to crash and burn because WoW has cornered the fantasy MMO market. 

I’ll give it a try if I ever get a good computer and it isn’t a monthly subscription thing. Basically, if it’s microtransactions, which I think is a really good payment model because I’m the sort of person who will work harder to not have to pay. 

As for the plot, hard to make sense of such huge earth-shattering events not having any mention in the (chronologically) later main series. Molag Bal trying to absorb Mundus is wholly in character for the Prince of Rape, but it seems like something too big to go into a prequel without any background.

Also, World of Warcraft is the big fantasy MMO. Most fantasy fans who play MMOs are probably already on that, and not likely inclined to switch anytime soon. I don’t expect it to be able to claw its way past the competition, so basically I expect failure.

If it’s monthly, I’ll watch the stuff on YouTube like I did with Star Wars: The Old Republic. No game is worth paying for more than once, especially at game prices today. 

A Look Back At: The Wheel of Time

Today, for my first movement of my story talks from livejournal to tublr, I am going to take a good look at the Wheel of Time series, started by Robert Jordan and currently being finished by Brandon Sanderson.

Counting from birth, the series is about a year younger than me, from conception probably somewhat older. I’ve done reviews and analyses of the individual books and, with the final volume just around the temporal corner, I feel a look at the series as a whole is in order. 

This will contain spoilers and lots of them, but will by no means be a stand-in for you to get all the information for the final installment without reading the others. Be aware, as there is so much information that is intended to be given over more than a dozen books, some of this will sound rushed and messy.

The Plot:

When I was about to start the series, I said on my livejournal that I had been led to believe it was a “more standard coming-of-age tale” when compared to Discworld, which I was also still fairly early in. I believe the proper sound is “Ahurm.” The first two or three books I feel can broadly be captured under that heading for what I suppose you could force yourself to call the three main characters. At the time, I suppose, they were: Rand al’Thor, a tall redheaded shepherd goes from wide-eyed farmboy to an effective fighter and resourceful adventurer; Perrin Aybara gets the girl and finds his wolf powers; Mat Cauthon learns to fend for himself and manipulate his unnatural luck. They spend many of the books wary of manipulation by Aes Sedai, women who can channel the One Power and are famous for many things, but especially for certain particulars.

Aes Sedai cannot outright lie. They are bound by sorcery to “speak no word that is untrue.” This has backfired horribly on them over the centuries as they are now known by reputation to be so skilled at manipulating both their own words and people’s expectations that the average man won’t trust that they aren’t somehow twisting a simple yes-or-no answer. They are also famous for their “ageless” faces, looking both young and old. This is thought to be due to long use of the Power, but is shown to really be due to the magical oaths they swear altering their appearances and limiting their lifespan (the silver lining is that channelers can live for centuries, so instead of a seventy-year span being reduced to forty-five, it is seven hundred going down to three). Finally, while there is a specific subset of them that do this, they are famous for finding men who can channel the Power and “gentling” them, or cutting them off from it. The inability to touch the Power but still sense it drives most men to suicide. “Stilling,” the female equivalent, does the same. They hunt down men who can channel because the male half of the power Saidin, tainted by the “Dark One,” a dualistic god of evil, drives men mad. To describe why this is important, imagine if a load of explosives capable of leveling a city was both sentient and insane. 

As the series continued, the plot expanded in scope and the three ta’veren, while still three of the most important characters, could go entire books with a single perspective chapter. After the characters came into their own as men and not boys, they still had eleven more books to go through. Against the backdrop of the apocalyptic Last Battle brewing, Rand must try to unite the various disparate nations behind his banner and deal with the double revelations that he is the reincarnation of an infamous kinslayer who lives in his head and can channel saidin and is therefore doomed to insanity and death. Perrin has to defend his home against both fanatical zealots and nightmare monsters. Mat accidentally raises and effectively leads an army by getting the memories of dead warriors forcibly shoved into his brain. 

The expanding cast is too huge to easily go into, but it includes Egwene, Rand’s childhood sweetheart and Aes Sedai in training (and, for a good chunk of the series, their Amyrlin or leader), Nynaeve, her former mentor and one of the most powerful channelers of their age, Aviendha, an Aiel warrior woman who can also channel, Elayne, hair-apparent of Rand’s home queendom;, Min, a woman who cannot channel but can see the future infallibly, the Forsaken, thirteen powerful channelers from the last time the Dark One was attacking the world directly who were frozen in time and are now released, and numerous backup characters, allies, enemies, bystanders, minions and townsfolk. 

As the three ta’veren twist events around them and the others run to keep up in the war against the Shadow, another problem bites them from behind: the Seanchan, a stiflingly ritualized and rigidly stratified empire across the sea. Their Empress is given the status of a living god, as is her ancestor Artur Hawkwing, and they feel that it is not only their right and inescapable responsibility but their very destiny as a nation to reclaim Hawkwing’s former lands. This is an Empire where looking a social superior in the eye is considered a grave legal offense, and as Rand is a rival conqueror who is not the Empress and is a man who can channel, he is an abberation. However also, the Seanchan have a modified version of the prophecies that herald Rand’s coming. Whether modified by the servants of the Shadow or by Seanchan propaganda, it is believed that Rand, as the Dragon Reborn, will kneel to their Empress and be her servant. There was a brief hope for peace in the interim between the murder of the Empress and the raising of her daughter, Mat’s wife Tuon (I told you this would be fast and messy) to the throne, but as Rand wanted to be an equal to the supposed living goddess who can, to the Seanchan, have no equal, it fell apart. Oh, and I failed to say already that they have magical leashes that enslave and dehumanize women who can channel, and again they consider it both their right and responsibility to do so. 

A number of the problems the characters face, rather than be the product of diabolical machinations, are products of their own weaknesses and flaws, which is a very realistic tack to take. Rand could have gone much farther and faster if he was willing to kill women. Now before you panic and say that I, Jordan or Sanderson condone violence against women (because I don’t), I mean a woman who is, much like Rand, basically a walking magic nuke. A primary example is Lanfear, Rand’s psycho ex-girlfriend from his previous life. She is one of the thirteen chanellers who were frozen in time in service to the Shadow. Because he is a woman, based both on his own culture and his growing Saidin-madness, he can’t kill or attack her even when she is trying to murder his girlfriend. Or, well, one of them.

Jumping tack again, says I the master of segues. Rand has women trouble. I’ll speak more on the battle of the sexes in the themes section, but Rand’s problem with women is a little different than the theme of gender strife. He is genuinely in love, by the midpoint of the series, with three women, Elayne, Aviendha and Min. For better or worse, all three of them reciprocate. While an agreement is reached, there is still unresolved awkwardness even now. 

Perrin’s woman trouble is more straightforward. His wife, Zarine, who is nicknamed or renamed Faile (which I do pronounce “fail,” I didn’t really like her character until book ten) is kind of insufferable. Oh sure, he loves her dearly and the narration lets us know it, but she is very bossy and haughty and, while her impulsiveness does help at least once, for the most part she is a problem-causer. 

I mentioned that Mat married the heir of the Seanchan Empire. I believe that accidentally marrying the future ruler of an invading army is by definition, woman trouble.

So at this point in the series, many of the hundreds of tiny side-threads are resolved. Not all, of course, there’s still one more book, but many of them. To give you an idea of how many plot threads are present throughout, there is at least one other external invasion and a major civil war between chanellers (probably two, once Rand founds his school for male chanellers and that gets taken over) that were not, I feel, big enough to mention in terms of summary. This series is damned massive

The Structure, Style and Themes:

The structure of the series is through third person limited perspective, jumping from one to the other. Usually one chapter will be mostly one character, sometimes jumping from one character to another. Usually, but not always, it will be jumping from a perspective character to someone they just encountered. The way the world and characters is described tends to be a character walking into a room, then the room and everyone in it are described in detail, then action. There are exceptions, but mostly that is how it goes.

I do not know Jordan’s writing process. I do not know to what extant he outlined, or to what extent he wrote as things happened in his mind. However, while there are dozens of little mini-plots that branch of from the main one at times, they all make sense in terms of “the character would act in a way that necessitates that.” It was a tradeoff and I think that, while it would be frustrating for people waiting for the books to come out so that they could advance the plot, for people starting the books now it just means you need a lot of time and patience. 

The amount and depth of the themes tend to be represented by the book size. The theme everyone seems to focus on is the “Mars and Venus gender contrast.” Okay, let me offer my two cents. I get that men and women tend to by turns intimidate and confuse each other. While I am firmly in the camp that says emotionally and intellectually women and men are equals and can just go under the broad heading of “human,” sexually is a whole ‘nother matter. Yes, sex is fun and very good, and it’s possible that the awareness of that one fundamental difference of sex organs and the different internal balance of sex hormones can inspire some level of communication issues even with people you, yourself are not attracted to. While I think a lot of time is spent on it over the whole series, it is usually with each character puzzling through it in different ways. I also feel that this topic is, for whatever reason, over-represented in online discussions of the books. 

The far more important and, when you aren’t talking about it online, present theme is the views of evil. Most great works of fantasy have some point to make on the nature of the big E, whether it is Tolkien and his use of the corruption of noble causes and “wraithing” set against the presence of a physical dark Lord or Martin, who has most of his war of good and evil be waged within the characters. Because Jordan uses a dualistic world, where there is a good god and an evil god, one based in order and creation and the other an embodiment of chaos and destruction, he has a clear and present evil, a shadow to go against “the light.” However, realizing that is both cliched and boring in fiction, Jordan added the politics and plotting and Seanchan. By having there be an extraordinary amount of infighting among the people who should be united against a physical embodiment of evil, he made his story much more deep and interesting. People try to gain from the situation, or feel themselves honor-bound to attack those who should be their allies, or are stuck in petty and simplistic ways of thinking. This is why the series, I feel, struck such a chord both in Jordan, the war veteran and in his readers who were growing up or living in the aftermath of the Cold War. 

The Death and Continuation:

Here is where this story takes a sad, yet also tentatively hopeful, turn. Robert Jordan died, just as he was writing what he said would be the last book. His wife and editor, Harriet, found Brandon Sanderson, already an author of his own fantasy series and a longtime fan of Wheel of Time to finish the massive undertaking. He, in turn, had to split it into three.

Reaction has been varied. Some like the quickened pace, although note that based on book eleven which was also much faster Sanderson is not wholly responsible, some are just grateful that the series they had followed for nearly two decades would be finished, and some, like my own respected friend and editor, think that Sanderson strays from the core of the characters. However, the fact that there was so little controversy surprises me extensively. 

My Thoughts:

I don’t dislike, on the whole, a single book in this series. Book ten was a chore to read for the most part, and was so damn slow (only Mat’s plotline seemed to significantly move), but it had enough cool moments that I couldn’t say I outright did not like it. I like the themes and characters, but most of all I would say I like the world. Cyclical time is a big thing in some of the series I’ve read, added to that the idea that the series is set in our own mythical time and that our own real time is theirs I find absolutely fascinating. 

I even like Sanderson’s work, I’m not gonna lie. I spot the differences in nuance here and there, but for them most part I would say that they could have done a lot worse to finish the books with. I actually like how Mat and Talmanes’ humor became more overt, but that is just me. His writing style is different, but like Jordan he is very descriptive, even if not in the same ways. I am very eager to see how he handles the end of the series.

Inaugural Post

It has become abundantly clear that I need a tumblr, both to respond to witty things cool people say online and as yet another tool in my promotional repertoire. So to start off, let me say who I am for tumblr…s? Sorry, I’m still learning the jargon.

I am a writer with two published short stories to sell and potentially hundreds more to write. I am currently doing the second draft on a novel tentatively subtitled Fate’s Foreshadow, with no known full title as yet. I have blogged before on livejournal but couldn’t amass a following of English-speakers. All my followers spoke and wrote in Russian.

I do most of my writing on libboo.com, a website that facilitates the self-publishing process. I’ve met everyone on Team Libboo who isn’t named Chris except the CEO Chris Howard (I hope to rectify that someday soon you two) and both of my published works are in their own collections. My first story, Wrath to the Least, is a fantasy zombie story in the same world as Fate’s Foreshadow, and is in their In Delirium Bloom collection. That link will take you to the free read-online version and links to where you can buy it on kindle or nook for only 99 cents. My second published story is nonfiction, called Away From it All, and is in the Vacation & Holiday Mayhem collection. Same deal on that link, the free read-online one and the links to the e-reader pages. My grand plan is to use sales of those two to allow me to afford to go up to RvBTO 2012, their final event, and to afford the aftermath.

As an aside, I love cats, books and video games. I eat a ton but stay fit through martial arts and morning exercises. I am still paying off my college loans and am taking a proofing class at the Cambridge Center for Adult Education so that I can still work in the industry even at my “day job.” At this point I work in two libraries and while I love it, the pay is poor at best. The internet is one of my favorite things because in a lot of ways it is more advanced than the wildest dreams of the craziest science fiction authors of the fifties and sixties. Fantasy is my favorite genre.

So, that’s my infodump. I hope to move my weekly reviews to this page and to leave little snippets for all to see.  

NOTE: I’ve edited this post for a slight factual error, I did meet Chris “Po” Pettigrew at the Libbooration of Publishing event in the British Consulate-General. That was my mistake.